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发信人: bartonchen (闲云野鹤), 信区: Flyingoverseas
标  题: 老外对我的ps的点评（转载）�
发信站: 哈工大紫丁香 (2001年09月29日18:18:25 星期六), 站内信件

发信人: rood (神鹞~鹞子翻身~一头雾水申请中~), 信区: AdvancedEdu
标  题: 老外对我的ps的点评,希望对大家有启发
发信站: BBS 水木清华站 (Sat Sep 29 17:37:21 2001)

我的ps就不贴出来了,
我的ps是用的4段
1.my education and work experience
2.fields that interest me
3.why i choose xxx university
4.my objective

我觉得他说的第一第二点都还是有帮助
原文如下:

Some comments:
1-Don't talk directly to the graduate committee (avoid "you" and "your")
2-Avoid sounding too enthusiastic.  You want to demonstrate your interests i
n a professional way.  Avoid emotional language.
3-You may want to drop the titles preceding your paragraphs and concentrate
on making your statement one coherent piece of writing (ie an essay).  This
may take time, so if you don't want to because you are sure that you will ge
t in, I think you can get away without doing it.  If you are concerned that
you may not get in, then you should do it.  The statement of purpose is very
important.  It demonstrates who you are and more importantly it shows that
you can write effectively.
4-Make sure you get many people to proofread your essay.  That way you will
have many ideas on how to revise it.
Great job!  Let me know if you would like me to proofread anything else

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用什么样的签名档才能吸引人呢？
//thinking ya thinking

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