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发信人: bartonchen (闲云野鹤.等到那一天), 信区: Flyingoverseas
标  题: 找个例子批判，赫赫（zz）
发信站: 哈工大紫丁香 (2002年06月22日20:10:19 星期六), 站内信件

发信人: IDandEGO (我爱Eliza), 信区: Visa
标  题: 找个例子批判，赫赫
发信站: BBS 水木清华站 (Sat Jun 22 02:01:12 2002)
随机摘选，请勿见怪，实在是太典型的一片了
VO：What you will do after you graduate?
I: I will come back to china and find a senior position in a institute
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or a big company. I can work as a associate researcher, then will be promote
d
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as a researcher and I hope I can direct my own research group. … And my
first choice is to find a position in school of software in *** , you see …

(interrupted)
VO给的第一次机会
我们看看第一段犯了多少错
1.开头废话
2.目的不明，居然有or，而且连个公司名字都没有，我是vo,句你一万年
3.ra where美说明，ra what不说？老大，不强调你的研究方向，你强调what
  而且研究成果没说
4.I hope I can,极度没信心�

5,first choice,怎么在最后阿
很简单，总共大概五句话，五个致命错误
VO：Why you want to be a professor?
I：Pardon？
VO：Why you want to be a professor?
I：Not exactly. Professor is a good choice, but my real interest is
research in my field.
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第二次机会
错误，to be a reseacher where and research what ?  一定要说你的special
VO：So why researcher?
I: Because I love research. I more concerned with the academic
position and academic achievements. I hope to get a high social
status. It is very interesting. And I hope to devote myself to
the research in this field.
Vo仍然给的第二次机会阐述回国plan
老大，理想主义没用，对付美国人，从功利主义，实用主义开始
你的dream no way
这一段纯属废话，浪费了签证官给的大好挽回机会
对付这儿的公式，
回xxx地方有  much more oppertunity, much more position,much more funds
and higher salary
有这四样，你怎么可能不回来？
当然，具体人具体的条件阿，别泛泛的opp fund salary
VO:You graduate from **** last year?
I: No. I will graduate in this year?
Vo: So, You start study last year?
I: Yeah.
VO: Why you graduate this year?
I: You see. My program is special for the student who has got his
first degree. And It is flexible. Since I finished all the courses
and thesis, I willgraduate this year.
VO: OK. You will graduate this year.
VO: Why after graduation you come back to study CS?
I: You know, my first major is administration management. And with the
computer technology developed, computer play more and more important role
in modern management. Many jobs can be done by computer. Information systems
is
just such a major incorporate manamgent and cs. I am fascinated by it.
But I think my knowledge about cs is not enough for me to do research in thi
s
field. So, I first choose to study in *** to lay a solid foundation of
computer knowledge to do research in this field.You know, my major is promis
ing in China.
VO给的最后一次机会
你还是那种国际国内大气候，大形势，then 个人对策的那种，必死无疑
VO: Sorry, I cannot give you visa today.
I: Why.
VO: The reason is on the paper I give you.
纵观全篇，签证官给了至少三次机会，都有可能一签而过，老大全浪费了，admire
像这样一次机会都抓不住的，的确罕有
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※ 修改:·IDandEGO 於 Jun 22 02:12:14 修改本文·[FROM:  202.112.160.36]
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※ 修改:·IDandEGO 於 Jun 22 02:12:14 修改本文·[FROM:  202.112.160.36]

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